Final cut of title sequence

Development 2

After shooting the improved idea from thursday and looking at the shots we determined that this idea was just as confusing as the last one, as there was no narrative so there was nothing to keep audiences interested based upon our observations we decided to rethink our idea to the dealing of the drugs, as we began to research this we found inspiration in the form of a breaking bad drug selling montage this inspired us to make a title sequence based on drug dealers, this idea eventually evolved into the idea of a chase involving a drug dealer and a vigilante with the dealer being the hunted we feel that this idea will incorporate a narrative and will also capture the atmosphere that we wanted.    

New font

This is the final font for the title of the title sequence this is the font for the title only we have decided that this font called punk rock show will only be good for the title so we have decided to use a different font for the credits.

This is the font that we have decided to use for the opening credits, at first i didn't really like this font as i didn't think that it worked but after positive feedback from several people i changed my mind

Feedback sheets

these are the six feedback sheets that we got after the initial screening of our film to an audience the feedback was largely positive although people did say that the map scenes slowed the pace down a lot, a comment i agree with to a certain extent we will use this feedback to edit the video for the final cut. 

Rough cut of my title sequence

Development

during the initial feedback our title sequence was not well received as we were told it was confusing and that there was no narrative to the sequence soon after we were shown the title sequence for "requiem for a dream" this inspired us to change our idea to drug making which we intend to begin making tomorrow using an empty science lab in school, as our new idea involves the process of drug making meaning that we will need professional looking equipment to make it look authentic and professional. Seeing as our whole idea has changed we may not have time to draw out a storyboard until a later date.    

Fonts for title sequences revised

After deciding that the initial fonts didn't really work for our films development we decided to find some new fonts we will ask people to vote and choose the font that gets the most votes.